Life

Written: April 22, 2024 For Matt Caliri Acrostic Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Life entails success over stress without distress Inviting the moon, even if missed, leads to stars Filling a dream, the soul is stronger than all else Evolving delight and trust provide you the best

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Hilo Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 7:20:00 PM

A wondrous set of accords for all life's concerns and resolve, Lasaad. Seems yours is much the trend of fellow soupers and not to tread like mine, yikes. GL on this special day for me, and Aloha, William

Jay Narain

Date: 4/23/2024 11:33:00 AM

A short and deep thoughtful poem.

Valsa George

Date: 4/23/2024 5:08:00 AM

You have pinned life to its essentials- success over stress, fulfilling dreams and evolving trust and delight with soul remaining most powerful. Confining to four lines, you have defined life at its best. All the Best.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2024 1:26:00 AM

Your excellent poem should be read daily as an opening verse by high school children as they start class. So important are you eloquent words chosen Lasaad, that it would be a wonderful way for them to start their day. a superb write my dear friend - kudos. Blessings and kind thoughts from across the pond. Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2024 1:06:00 AM

Short but powerful. Great rhymes and splendid allusions to the cosmic beauty. Best for a win.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/22/2024 11:34:00 PM

Wow what a beautiful acrostic for life dr sotto! Your use of nature to depict life with rhymes and brilliant imagery is what makes this stand out for me! I especially love “ Inviting the moon, even if missed, leads to stars Filling a dream, the soul is stronger than all else” brilliant! Just so deeply moving and soulfully poetic! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest! Youv done an excellent job in my eyes!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/22/2024 3:30:00 PM

nicely written 'life' Acrostic, Sotto. I particularly liked the 3d line. Best wishes with the contest & have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/22/2024 10:56:00 AM

Hello Soto, oh, this is wonderful. My fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2024 10:18:00 AM

- Yes, truth in your lines Las - Great written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs