Life

Life is the baptism of water cleansing all sin, if we falL Instilled in the teachings of man's origins, God's alumnI Fused by the heart and mind all forgiving, Time is brieF Entrusted to mankind from the beginning, in God abidE.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/19/2024 2:36:00 PM

A very interesting acrostic. It was spiritual and uplifting.

Daniel Caplin
Date: 4/21/2024 10:35:00 AM

Hi Hilda , I'm so pleased you found it both spiritual and uplifting , thank you for reading and your kind comments . Danny

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/19/2024 5:32:00 AM

Now you've gone and totally wowed me with your Acrostic 'life' at both the beginning and end of each line! Seriously, well done. Plus, your lines have a wonderful message. This should do well in the contest. Have a great day! Sara

Daniel Caplin
Date: 4/19/2024 11:11:00 AM

Hello Sara, it hasn't been entered into the contest, sometimes it's good to challenge yourself without competing. So pleased you liked it though. Have a great weekend . Danny