Life

Girls take it serious Boys goof around, they act like 2-year olds Stomp all around, laughing things that aren’t that funny, Not taking life seriously They laugh and poke fun not knowing How they will soon be.

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/6/2009 6:16:00 AM

Funny though, yet it’s a fact to you. Hope it’s not your Bf that provoked your pen. I love this well written piece. Keep writing. You are great. change the poetry form to free verse, it'snot iI do not know

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2009 7:33:00 PM

This is often the case, Rhonda, but the boys finally do grow up and sometimes wonder why they acted "like 2-year olds." It's often said that women mature faster, and I guess that's true for most. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn