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Life

I laugh I cry, i dream, i try. i hope, i pray i get another day. i love, its as white as a dove. i go left, when im suppose to go right. i make mistakes, sometimes i get misplaced. i get torn down, watch as pieces get picked up all around. i sometimes cry, ask why. I'll live, then there will be a day that i will die. My place will be taken with such an innocent face. It will make many mistakes, but life goes on, all that will be left is my trace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2009 1:39:00 PM
i also enjoyed this write, hey hey life goes on as Joe Walsh sings, nice.
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Date: 4/23/2009 11:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one. . . had to check it out as I too wrote a piece called "Life". It was interesting to read the differing viewpoint. Thank you, well done.
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Date: 2/20/2009 12:38:00 PM
great poem! this one really got to me love it great job
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Date: 1/13/2009 4:26:00 PM
lovely poem and soo true! life goes on..great write! .....Maryam
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Date: 1/13/2009 3:41:00 PM
Elizabeth, life goes on,,if theres one thing you finally learn its that. This I liked. Laurie
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