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You fleet so blithely, unaware That here I stand, awash with care My heart is heavy, lost to thrill Of dreams deterred, it’s had its fill I think of all that’s left undone Of trophies that I haven’t won Your blessings you did not bestow Now time is short, and that I know You mock me, Life, with hurtful glee For me no joyous jubilee My zenith, passed, my strength has waned But tell me Life, what have you gained? One less soul to tempt your fate And as I linger at the gate So loathe to leave you, though unkind In death no solace can I find So in this time that still remains Come let us kiss, forget the pains Life, be enticed to lover’s tryst Grant me the joys that I have missed Let’s fall in love, before I’m gone Admit, dear Life, you’ve done me wrong Let passion bless my dying days For only then, I’ll sing your praise Inflame my veins with your embrace No tortured thought, but blissful grace Life, intercourse with you is sweet In this full bloom, the end I’ll greet Bathed in the beauty of release Where every conscious thought must cease In afterglow of ecstasy Please end my life, and let me be Eileen Manassian

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Date: 9/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
Your words light up the page and the essence of your word still rings true with my head. Little One, may you always be "bathed in the beauty of release" and your words continue to spread joy to us! Miss you!
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Date: 9/8/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thanks again Eileen for the birthday blog. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/7/2019 9:42:00 AM
Well. Life. what was that all about ? Nicely written thoughts for Everyman (and woman).
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
I miss your poetry... I hadn't been back in a while, but had fave'd several of your poems. This is a wonder. God bless you and I hope to hear from you.
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:44:00 AM
So sad you have not been back.
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Date: 8/4/2019 9:09:00 AM
This one is in the top 100 new poems. Congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2019 6:20:00 AM
I just like to say that I could relate to this poem and the thoughts with effort. Enjoyable
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Date: 7/23/2019 12:51:00 PM
Dropping by with a hello and a hug.
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Date: 7/15/2019 1:16:00 AM
It feels so good to find your poetry again sweet Eileen.Life has cursed us and life has blessed us in many ways...How beautiful if only life could let us taste what never ending love is all about...but I doubt that exists..Life is like a roller-coaster..Love cones and love goes..to come again even stronger.Beautiful poem Eileen.
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:41:00 AM
Lovely writing style...Enjoyed
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Date: 7/11/2019 10:30:00 AM
As always artfully expressed but as well disturbing. Art should make us uncomfortable and cause us to think as well as feel. This does that in spades. Warm thoughts and prayers headed to you. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/11/2019 10:11:00 AM
Eileen, I like this poem of life unrequited. -Richard
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