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Life

Back pain, ankle strain, brain drain Wake up dead no pain, no strain Positive thinking eyes are blinking Sun moon and stars red rosy mars Negative thinking my feet are stinking Just want this day to slip away Friends and family gather round Sun is shining on the ground Beach and ball memories for all Children playing always hurrahing Peace and prosper only proper Best is yet to come before I’m done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/16/2018 2:25:00 PM
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I love this little rhyme here. I haven't been on here in a while. How are you :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2018 4:34:00 PM
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Love the humour Superman, Despite the creaking and groaning we have to get on with life and I agree with the positive thinking and best definitely is yet to come Niall:-) hugs Jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/18/2018 5:40:00 PM
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Hi Jan :) thanks for comment :) lol lots done more to do ::)))))Hugs~~~Niall
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2018 4:00:00 AM
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- By positive thinking ... it will be a wonderful day, Niall - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/18/2018 11:45:00 AM
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Hi Anne-Lise, ::))) all about the positive for sure my friend~~~Niall
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/17/2018 3:57:00 PM
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An upbeat, witty poem on life, Niall. Enjoyed the quick tempo! Nice to read your work. Thanks for your comment. CD
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/17/2018 5:40:00 PM
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Hi Carolyn, thank you for comment :) looking forward to reading more of your writes ::)))Hugs ~~~Niall
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/17/2018 3:40:00 AM
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As you get older you do tend to creak a bit, but yes live every day and good things do come. Tom
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/17/2018 2:27:00 PM
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Hi Tom ,thanks for comment , lol lots done more to do::))) ~~~Niall
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:33:00 PM
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A fun poem, Niall. Best is yet to come for sure.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/17/2018 1:28:00 AM
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Hi Line , thank you for comment , have a great day my friend::)))Hugs~~~Niall

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