Lifacide

Everyday is a battleground, I fight for every breath, struggling to keep the pain of life from outweighing the finality of death.

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Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/16/2012 1:46:00 PM

Everyday is a battle day, war in the little world of my mind.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/15/2012 9:56:00 AM

Like your philosophy. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM

Deep... thank you for sharing.. I also know that this set is called (couplets) ,, hopefully it helps ,,your I do not know title... always~ LINDA

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 11/16/2012 1:56:00 PM

Hi Linda, long time no see... Haha.. am missing you, i don't see this as couplet but free verse. Nothing couple about the poem. It is a free verse of 7 lines. Couplets are spaced in two lines stanzas.

Robert Whitby
Date: 11/11/2012 5:42:00 PM

Thanks for the advice. I'm trying to figure all this out. haha!