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Lies That I Hide

Hurt its a feeling of pain even if i cry i will maintain a same level of disgrace That got me in this place Lies that i hide As eating my inside nothing but a hollow shell I fear im in hell Call for the helper But i don't knows were he dwells HE HIDDEN HIS FACE cause Im in a dark place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/15/2009 4:23:00 PM
your soul is YOUR LIGHT in the darkness :) Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:50:00 AM
The helper,our helper who created us is there twenty four hours a day,we just need to lay our faith in him..difficult when once in pain to find a smile,but the sun will shine again--Charma
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Date: 9/21/2009 5:17:00 AM
This is wonderful. I really like the rhyming pattern and the flow of the poem. It really shows reality. Welcome to poetrysoup. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/19/2009 11:35:00 AM
I know the feeling of being so far away that you can't find your way back....and of feeling too far away to be seen. However, we are always only a breath away from that help if we truly seek it. Nice write, Marco! Donna
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:58:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Marco. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:25:00 PM
The helper dwells within, nice work and Welcome to Poetry Soup...Raul
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Date: 9/17/2009 11:20:00 AM
IT IS I IN YOU
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