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Lie Down On Me

I wait for you in the moonlight In the quiet of the night Within this room that holds So many moments of your life The dreams you've dreamed Still linger here Between these flower-papered walls That look beyond the window At the Autumn leaves that fall A quilted robe lies draped across A wicker rocking chair That held you and rocked you When grief Was more than you could bear A bassinet now empty Where once a baby slept Remains enshrined Chained to a time By the million tears you wept A picture of a handsome man With you there by his side A bride and groom so in love With stardust in their eyes Stands behind a pane of glass Within a gilded frame Where your lip prints and finger prints On its surface..still remain And now... I hear your slippers As they slide across the floor And I hear... Your laboured breathing Outside this bedroom door And I know that soon I'll hold you Here in this flower-papered room And soothe your old And frail body In the light of a silver moon I...your old companion An antique Rosewood Bed Let me hold you...Mary Beth I..the best friend you've ever had Let me hold you through the night And bring you back...again Sweet Mary Beth Into the morning light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/10/2024 7:40:00 AM
Reading this poem one would never look at the bed in agony of old age.
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Date: 9/26/2020 5:11:00 PM
such a touching piece Elaine I love the personification it moved me to tears. congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Elaine George
Date: 10/4/2020 4:41:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, and for your kind comments, Jan...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 9/26/2020 8:12:00 AM
Oh, this one has made me cry. How beautiful and moving! CONGRATS, Elaine! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:55:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, Janice...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 5/20/2020 4:24:00 PM
Elaine Your poems are amongst the very best in this group! Extremely good! This one is exceptional! I have read a few of your poems now and I shall be reading more and more of them!
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Elaine George
Date: 5/20/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Krish...for your very kind comments...so much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 6/25/2018 3:48:00 PM
Elaine.. the more I read the more excited I got. This is what Personification is meant to be. This poem should be used as its model. It's smart and emotive. Each line builds on the last. Each stanza moves you to the "reveal". There are no wasted words, nothing that gives you pause. From the first word you are moved to the last. This poem feels perfect and it's pure joy even after multiple reads. You are an artist!
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Elaine George
Date: 6/26/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Dave...and for your kind comments. Actually, a personification I wrote in 2006 entitled, VIOLIN, and reposted here recently is being used as a teaching tool on many teaching websites. I had no idea when I wrote it, that it would be so honored. Elaine
Date: 4/27/2018 8:34:00 PM
Oh my gosh, utterly beautiful in its sadness. What a wonderful friendship to last those years and be there for her in the end. I loved this,Elaine.
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Elaine George
Date: 4/28/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Andrea, and for your welcomed comments. Elaine
Date: 4/21/2018 10:42:00 AM
This is too beautiful......heartfelt and so very sad that years must pass so quickly, and slowly we watch our loved ones become frail and slip away, just as time itself. A wonderful poem, Elaine . You never fail to move me :)
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Elaine George
Date: 4/26/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your most welcomed comments, Carrie.
Date: 4/21/2018 6:39:00 AM
A beautiful personification Elaine, so many lovely thoughts and beautiful memories, a surprise ending. A definite fave for me that requires many a reread....Maria xx
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Elaine George
Date: 4/26/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your most welcomed comments, Maria.
Date: 4/19/2018 10:55:00 PM
Oh such a beautifully poignant poem, Elaine. Your personification is so moving and so lovingly and artistically expressed. A stunning poem that captivated me from start to finish.. a deep and emotional poem that I truly enjoyed.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Elaine George
Date: 4/21/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by...and for your kind comments, Susan...much appreciated. Sincerely. Elaine.
Date: 4/18/2018 12:29:00 PM
A beautiful and touching personification, Elaine! So many treasured memories! Your poems never fail to deliver. Best regards // paul
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Date: 4/21/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by...and for your kind comments, Paul...much appreciated. Sincerely. Elaine.
Date: 4/17/2018 3:51:00 AM
- A poem filled with love, a pleasure to read - Wonderfully written, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Anne Lise. So nice to hear from you. Elaine

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