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Liberty Comes At a High Price

In honor of the Land of the Free Forget not the tears of the abused The pain of those persecuted The courage of the pioneers The land of the free offered refuge, Liberty comes at a high price. Forget not those who defended your rights At the cost of their life It is so often the peacemaker’s plight And the cries of those left behind. Liberty comes at a high price. Forget not that you used to be deprived Desperately seeking a way to survive But now you can choose the way to thrive In this land so often criticized. Liberty comes at a high price. Forget not that no land has ever offered Such freedom that to man so matter Opening its door to a future better For you and me, brothers and sisters. Liberty comes at a high price. All these privileges you enjoy Could never have been in employ Without those who braved all odds, giving up their own joy In my name, your God. Liberty comes at a high price. August 6th, 2007. Entered for Dane Ann's contest, "Liberty and Freedom to choose".

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Date: 12/5/2009 12:27:00 PM
We should never forget that many lives have been shed and others left impoverished in our quest to remain free, Caroline. And I couldn't agree with you more about the way our country is "so often criticized" in spite of the safe haven of liberty it has offered to so many throughout the centuries. Excellent writing, as I've come to expect from you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2009 9:28:00 AM
Brilliant piece of poetry and a delightful reading. Lovely to read. Very true and beautiful. My father was a freedom fighter I know the how much he had suffered for bringing Independence to India under Mahatma Gandhi. Thanks a lot Would invite you to read some of my poem too Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 11/28/2009 11:01:00 AM
Liberty does come at a price, very patriotic piece and a delight to read >> James
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Date: 11/26/2009 11:30:00 PM
very nice double whammy tribute. Veterans and thanksgiving days. Thanks for sharing those extremely important thoughts and reminders, Caroline. We need more people thinking about what we take for granted.
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Date: 11/26/2009 7:37:00 AM
It sure does , Caroline . Great presentation and wishing you a Happy US holiday ....
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Date: 11/24/2009 11:45:00 PM
Like th kyrielle flavour Caroline.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 11/24/2009 10:20:00 PM
Very nice poem Caroline....Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:16:00 PM
So much truth in your words. Our troops and their families know the cost. Blessings to them for their courage. Happy Thanksgiving to you too. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 11/24/2009 5:16:00 PM
god bless you and the soldiers who help keep us free!!
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:22:00 PM
Well written, kept me attentive throughout....Good job....:JP]
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:12:00 PM
Nicely done write reminding us of the fact that freedom has a high price and that there is not freedom with responsibility. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:28:00 PM
Enjoyed your poetry today, Caroline. Liberty has come at a high price. As also it did for our Lord and savior. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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