Liberty

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 1/11/2014 12:59:00 PM

The process of freedom internally, and externally beautifully expressed in this short piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like.

Lori Hopkins
Date: 1/14/2014 11:31:00 AM

thank you very much, yes Jiril the process :) and i certainly will.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/3/2013 6:07:00 PM

You chopped the words wisely. Very inspiring and so wise 'grasshoppah' :)

Lori Hopkins
Date: 10/3/2013 9:13:00 PM

thank you wise sage~ :D

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 10/1/2013 7:05:00 PM

"freedoms just another word for nothing left to lose" Kris Kristofferson I dig the poem. Solid. ~Kilmer

Lori Hopkins
Date: 10/1/2013 8:46:00 PM

ohhh.ya, love the quote. thank you. ~lori