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liatris' tender green shoots come through earth to light... human seek darkness
I know not a true Haiku

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Maybe not by the book...but I don't care much for the rules anyway...I think its very cool. And to your question...I shot the snake...the dog (dogs can take a rattler bite better than people) her nose swelled up to the size of a softball. I felt terrible for her....but it was a little comical.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:42:00 PM
    I too think it's stunning Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 8:51:00 PM
    I don't know about that. if not something a magazine would accept , I think at the very least, it has the elements of haiku. The contrast in that third line is really awesome!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:59:00 PM
    There would be so much less cruelty in the world if more followed this plants simple act. Great thinking, Sara. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:43:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! You have written a wonderful Haiku, even though you said it wasn't a true Haiku...though I believe, as Nette said, that this is a contemporary Haiku...this is an awesome poem Sara!I loved reading this delightful piece, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:35:00 AM
    - A deep Haiku, Sara - (whatever - it's YOURS, haiku) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 6:55:00 AM
    a contemporary kind of 'ku that delivers a wallop, sara.. so remarkable!..:) huggs!