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Liar

His words like razors cut my spirit and left me lonely Lost in his falsities and scarred by his broken promises Afraid of the immoralities that occupied his mind I strayed from my own beliefs, facing head on what may have been my demise Frightened by his threats, bruised and battered, I cried out I begged for help from others in silence and fear I cried out to God to rescue me His touch was nearly unbearable His fists were filled with malicious intent He had no values, no faith, and he showed no remorse His spirit was completely engulfed by anger, by hatred Control was his goal, I was his possession Inferiority was the fuel for the fires of rage that burned within him Insecurity was the torch that stoked the embers into flames Lies dripped from his tongue like molasses Thick and dark, bitter sweet words of kindness and gentility, of love Like poison darts to my ears and heart as I gave of myself fully to him I believed he could change though his wickedness would not allow it He was held captive by his own demons Acting out from the evil that thrived within the soul of this monster A fiend sucking the very life out of me, chewing away at the pieces that remained A permanent stain on my memory he still haunts me in my dreams *Inspired by Deborah Guzzi’s Wickedness Contest Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 3:36:00 PM
Wow, this man was WICKED..conrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/14/2009 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in DG's contest, molasses dripping lies- this is awesome!-AA
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:24:00 AM
Dear Lolita,Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved Win in Deborah" Contest A very disturbing Write Excellently Crafted ALWAYS... HG
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:21:00 AM
Lena, Wicked men, (9-four letter words...) WICKED WIN!! Congratulations on placing Danielle's contest. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/13/2009 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Lolita Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/13/2009 10:04:00 PM
Hi Lena, congradulations on placing in the contest with this piece. Very intense, graphic, surreal. I join L'nass in praying it's fictional. If not I hope he got what's coming to him...Yoni
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:48:00 PM
Lolita, congrats on your placement in the contest...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:34:00 PM
Great job, Lena....Congratulations on your winning poem!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:11:00 PM
Warmest congrats on your win in Debbie's contest! Extremely well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/23/2009 8:26:00 AM
A very descriptive write ... and I pray solely imaginative ... I am getting madder and madder for my mother's, my sister's, my daughter's, and all the women of earth bruised by senseless masculine transgressions ... see my poem for battered women. This is a great write ... I hope it will not only do well in Deb's contest, but that it will be transformational. Peace and smiles, poet
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Date: 4/23/2009 6:07:00 AM
This is truly an excellent entry for the contest. Wicked probably doesn't even come close when you are living it. Harsh reality too many suffer through. Powerful and upsetting. Well written - good luck in the contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:00:00 AM
wow this was a loaded cutting edge write loved it lena loved it
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Date: 4/23/2009 4:15:00 AM
wheww!! this one gives me shivers!!! nice work! Lena! Jim
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Date: 4/22/2009 11:12:00 PM
this is sad,sadness described so well to the extent that it touches our hearts-bitter sweet words-some people never change unfortunately and are not worth it to haunt our dreams-and we have to beware or else they play games,men all to the bonfire;-)im joking!wonderfully penned my friend----charma
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Date: 4/22/2009 11:11:00 PM
Nice work Lolita and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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