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Letting Go Aunt Minnie

I remember you in all your faces from the photograph of a young girl surprised at being looked at, and later, Sun brown and strong over the garden hoe or throwing your head up to one side around the nanny's rump to milk her. I remember your white face in the doorway when you came, night-dressed and uncombed to tell us to settle down and go to sleep, The smiling face as you put the lemon pie to cool just inside the back screen door. My favorite! I said. You said you know! Best of all was the face that stayed indoors while we stripped the hollyhocks of reds and pinks for dancing ladies. In the quiet afternoon, our small voices written on the warm green breeze. Then came your grandmother and great- grandmother faces, made up of babies and children and of the old women Who used to be your daughters. Now one more pose one more shutter click. Move slightly to one side, just out of camera range. See the set? The scene plays on; the mouths are Still moving. You can look at it from this point of view: all glass and the sound of a bell. Take up the shimmer and enter the sound; everything is possible. You and I will be girls together, hold hands and Swing one another in wild circles. It's all right; you know all the others and the rest of us will be there soon.

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Date: 8/14/2022 4:51:00 PM
"our small voices written on a warm green breeze" your use of leaping lines .. conscious to subconscious....reminds me of Lorca, Bly, even Neruda! Quite talented poet my new friend! to mine faves...jimmy
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/14/2022 10:17:00 PM
James, how kind of you to comment on my poem! To me, conscious and unconscious exist side by side. Perhaps I have read too much South American poetry and novels. It does please me that you get it. I have had a look at your work; so deft, adroit, and learned that I can't single any one out. Thank you! Elizabeth
Date: 7/30/2022 3:32:00 PM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this winner. Way to gol Congrats. Sara
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/30/2022 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I really appreciate your feedback! Elizabeth
Date: 7/30/2022 9:37:00 AM
Very tender, Elizabeth. Congratulations on your win!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/30/2022 11:31:00 PM
So kind of you to comment, Sam. Encouraging! Elizabeth
Date: 7/30/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Heartwarming! :)Paulette
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Date: 7/27/2022 8:48:00 PM
Poignant, tender and touching, Elizabeth. Sweetness permeates each stanza. Thanks, Gershon
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/27/2022 9:01:00 PM
and you reply is equally sweet and touching. How kind of you. She was a wonderful lady, seeming always complete in herself.