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Letting Go

Latching on to ill will, I seed a sour thought evolving, it bore a fruit of venom in my heart this toxicity ruined my Life and took joy in a snatch taking care of thoughts that take root I now watch, insensitive words or actions from others I cannot control noting my reactions, my thoughts are now under my patrol, greatness may lie in forgetting and forgiving others wrong gaining absolute control of my thoughts is what I really long other adverse thoughts I let go and do not allow them to throng. ************ Caging all the grudges in I was left in pain stubborn they remain clogging my heart, freeing them up brought in the shine abandoning my hold I happily dart. ************ open wounds of hurt left fresh in heart, healed fast with a forgiving thought. Letting Go-Three Form Style - Poetry Contest Part 1: An acrostic Part 2: One quatrain Part 3: A senyru Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 4/14/2016 8:00:00 AM
Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks a lot bl
Date: 4/13/2016 9:40:00 PM
Sathya, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/13/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thank You Linda
Date: 4/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sathya :)
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/13/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 4/13/2016 2:49:00 PM
Liked all the three forms...Congratulations on your win!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/13/2016 10:00:00 PM
Thanks a Lot Meenakshi
Date: 4/13/2016 1:35:00 PM
Sathya, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/13/2016 10:00:00 PM
Many Thanks Laura

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