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Letting Go

nothing i ever do will ever be good enough for you no one i ever seen has ever been quite as mean you tried to hide me you took my soul i try to forget you like a memory hole no words i ever write will ever be so clear the sun will shine oh so bright in the morning when you are here i cant remember the way you smile please forgive me if im not back for a while oh forgive me if its not clear i cant remember what im doing here in the morning in the night down by the shore failing light we walked along holding hands singing playing with sand words twisted in melody life in staggered visionary hey their girl are you free you seem to be here alone would you like to dance with me and talk a little on the phone hay their girl it must be fate you missed your train you are an hour late come with me ill see you home a girl like you should not be alone its so hard letting go so hard to let go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 7:01:00 AM
nicely done, welcome to the soup, I am kinda new myself keep sharing, I see you have bee busy writing, good job
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:44:00 AM
Kenny, Thank you for sharing your words, today. I understand the sentiment all too well. Letting go is VERY difficult. But, with wisdom gained, it is usually for the better... and someone better. God bless you. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/9/2009 4:37:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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