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Letter To a 16yr Old

Wish I could  put an old head on young shoulders Would love you to be able to see show you that how  you live your life is what you  leave as a legacy Any mess your generation makes in the way the world is run and how it lives Is what you leave for others to sort out not an easy task, to make sure it does survive So always think, make sure your actions are the best that you can do Hmmm starting with your bedroom Or shall I de-clutter that for you? 27 December 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 4:36:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
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Date: 1/5/2013 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Seren!! Happy New Year and Good day! :)
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Maria, hope the new year has started well for you....Seren
Date: 1/1/2013 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Ndaba and Happy New Year to you ....Seren
Date: 1/1/2013 8:19:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet and artist friend, Seren! Happy New Year, too! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/1/2013 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Leonora you know me I will have a go at all writing.....Seren
Date: 12/31/2012 5:44:00 PM
Seren congrats on your win, is the room still de-cluttered...Happy New year...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 6:27:00 PM
a place for everything and everything in its plae .........if I could find the place haha.......Seren
Date: 12/31/2012 5:29:00 PM
Congrats and Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/31/2012 6:27:00 PM
thanks Michael... same to you ....Seren
Date: 12/31/2012 2:27:00 PM
Big congrats Seren love, and all the best for the new year xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/31/2012 5:14:00 PM
hope 2013 brings you all you wish for hun xx
Date: 12/28/2012 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful write Seren! A legacy born from helping others- wonderful advice. Well penned!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/31/2012 5:15:00 PM
thanks Vicky Happy New year to you ... Seren
Date: 12/27/2012 8:19:00 PM
wow, you are always thinking of others and how to change the world, even in this letter to your younger self. Wonderful one, Seren. the ending is awesome cute.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/31/2012 5:17:00 PM
thanks Andrea Happy New Year ... Seren

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