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Let's Pretend

Hey, let's pretend... that you and I... are traveling throughout... the heavenly skies... hand in hand... and by and by... our journey along galaxy-way... is so exciting... wouldn't you say... so let's wend along... and on our way... we'll share... some colorful things... such the view... of Saturn's rings... oh! what a thrill... it really brings... to ride upon... a shooting star!... traveling on... and on afar... gathering star dust... from the Golden Star... just enough... for you and I... to sprinkle later... in the sky... to make believe again... is why........... Just you and I.

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Date: 7/26/2010 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lawrence. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2008 9:19:00 AM
Nice write. This is one of my favs of yours (and "By The Sea"). Your rhymes flow nicely
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