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Lets Opinion Be Different

Let's opinion be different so there is story I do not like to air criticism I just only like to ask And the question itself will be criticism Criticism on people who were asked If to ask would be more prudent Criticism is quite violent I am so afraid of violence I have to use the technique Technique to ask with its critique And that is certainly more painful Like a snake that run along quiet But the extract of poison is very painful I also laughed when criticism aired among True indeed… Translation... PENDAPAT BIAR BERBEZA Oleh Neldy Jolo Biarkan pendapat itu berbeza jadi ada cerita Aku tidak suka berkritik Aku suka sahaja betanya Dan pertanyaan itu sendiri akan jadi kritikan Kritikan pada orang yang ditanya Kalau bertanya akan lebih berhemah Mengkritik itu agak keras Aku sangat takut kekerasan Aku kena menggunakan teknik Teknik bertanya dengan kritikan bersamanya Dan yang pastinya itu lebih pedih Ibarat ular yang menyusur tenang Tetapi bisanya sangat pedih Aku juga tertawa bila berkritikan sesama Benar belaka… Wednesday, 20 March 2013, 4:59 PM Let US All Save Peace. Ilyimy. Layag Sug! Puisi hasil perkongsian cerita dengan Cikgu Ezza Fazlina Jamlidi

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Date: 3/25/2013 1:46:00 PM
Yes people should be allowed different opinions and still respect each other...without fear of violence....
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