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lets make love 8

                                                 Sleep my lover
                                 you and I, under the deep blue sky
                            break into my dreams, with your open arms
                                        your sealed lips with mine
                                                   lets intertwine
                                                   with love's fluid
                                                  sacred and divine.
                             sleep till the morning kisses your undraped skin
                                                placed against mine.  
                                                      lets infiltrate
                                                         our soul
                                                     beyond the time
                                                     as we make love
                                                        so my lover
                                                         to discover
                                                       lets make love !
                                                       lets make love  !



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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 2:49:00 AM
    Very lovely poem, dear Red! I wonder whether the poems is more beautiful or YOU. Anyway, the poem is more than enough to arouse any man's feelings of love. I wish I were your addressee!!! hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh In that case, I would have obeyed your command immediately. May we get introduced?

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 2:35:00 PM
    Sounds good to me! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 9:54:00 AM
    Very sensuous poetry !!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 11:13:00 AM
    You are quite clear in this poem. Fine erotic imagery! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 2:19:00 PM
    I'm 65 but still 'alive' I loved every word. God bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 8:00:00 AM
    lets make love 8, 1 to 7 was pretty exhausting Red, but loved every minute, hope i can keep it up, the reading of the poems that is. harry

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 7:09:00 PM
    So soft and gentle, like a dream you can't awaken from. A lovely experience!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 11:41:00 AM
    awww..great poem Red! Its just as lovely to read as it is to see you writing again.I`ve missed your poems lately:) Hugzzz,Arild

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Red fantastic follow up, been waiting for this sensual and sexy episode,nice to see you writing David

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 3:19:00 AM
    WOW.... beautiful love poem Red !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise