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Lets Make It Dark

we visited- brandenburg gate and charlottenburg palace oh so lovely we prayed on our knees at the berlin cathedral saw all the museums there are to see I wept at the berlin wall but darling, lets go back, lets hurry To das stue hotel and close the curtains lets make it dark and have an afternoon of passion instead of drinking coffee in the cafes of berlin __________________ January 17, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/lets make it dark Copyright Protected, ID 01-745-441-17 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/19/2016 8:42:00 AM

Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7

Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2016 6:21:00 PM

Funom, thanks for the beautiful and the 7 !

James Inman

Date: 1/18/2016 3:07:00 PM

What an invitation, never liked coffee that much anyway. Great write, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 6:42:00 PM

James, your so funny, yeah lets skip the coffee, thanks for visiting ~

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/18/2016 1:56:00 AM

Yes, let us drink the the purple love of gothic bound passion Poetess...Mmmmmm.....so very romantic, and urgently, lovely dark...your use of word spacing is very sensuous to me, and your intimate references to Germany's wonders is so arousing my Wings of Fire...J.A.B. I must FAV! this special poem...

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 6:51:00 AM

Justin, thank you so much, what a perfectly divine comment, oh lovely is the fav !

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2016 1:26:00 PM

ha ha I love the humourous aspect of your poem Broken Wings lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2016 2:54:00 PM

Jan, thanks for seeing the fun part or shoud I say the passion in this poem, lol !

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2016 11:59:00 AM

Just too funny. We don't get to see this kind of expression very often. Passion is not a bad thing. You are just too sweet!

Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2016 2:55:00 PM

Duke, thanks for visiting, always a delight, happy you saw the humour and the passion and thanks for the sweet ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/17/2016 9:00:00 AM

so moving, constance.. your images have that sweet melancholic feel.. huggs

Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2016 9:49:00 AM

Nette thanks for the nice comment and for the hugs , appreciate ~

Miraj Raha

Date: 1/17/2016 8:57:00 AM

nice idea,Broken wings.

Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2016 9:50:00 AM

Miraj, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~