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Lets Do Something Different

All is peaceful inside the house the somnolent are sleeping, curled up like a mouse A new day tomorrow will bring news of the world We will see what man can do..... He was given this earth that he might subdue, He could have the Lord to help him through But, Lo he has chosen his own way to pursue If history follows, without the Lord there, repeated mistakes when we leave his care. Then wars ensue didn't we just pass this way, I believe it is a repeat of yesterday?

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Arturo Michael

Date: 9/26/2019 4:50:00 AM

Good one

David Drowley

Date: 9/23/2019 4:17:00 PM

'Dawne, Excellent write. Keep up the good work in line with God's view. David'

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/18/2019 7:01:00 PM

" We will see what man can do....." - we surely will. Thanks for the reminder.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/28/2019 10:32:00 PM

A beautiful write, wonderfully composed and aptly woe filled with the sad truth that mankind errs today as man did in every century. BUT the good exist and grow, it's just that they're quiet with no ego, greed or power thrust to falsely raise their calm to LOUD. I really enjoyed your poem. All the best ... CayCAy