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Let's Churn Some Butter

Just as butter is made my churning cream Light that love and churn that dream Churn it till it’s smooth as can be Then generously spread it all over me Roast me, toast me then throw me in the pot Crank up the heat because I like it hot No need to time it so lets explore Churning our dream till we can churn no more The longer we churn the smoother the cream That’s what makes us a perfect team Each forever willing to do our part To churn our dream with all our heart

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John Loving Iii

Date: 9/5/2008 6:58:00 AM

my grandmother used to churn milk every day, very rarely have i thought of it this way. way to go mike! JHL

Krislyn Panugayan

Date: 9/1/2008 5:15:00 AM

Wow! This is a cute poem! I like the rhyme and the comparison... it melts my heart.... Take care!

Tony Hwilka

Date: 8/27/2008 7:49:00 PM

A fine poem to practice friendship, marriage, etc. Thank you for your comment on Road to Alaska.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2008 6:26:00 AM

I really do love this one!....Just terrific! One of my favorites!.....Blessings...Carrie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/26/2008 9:00:00 AM

Great outlook. Keep churning. Vince

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/26/2008 5:07:00 AM

This has such a smooth and fun beat to it. The couplet form offers a lightheartedness to the read as the content as well, through great imagery, does the same. Very well written my friend and never stop sharing. MIchael

Brian Strand

Date: 8/26/2008 1:55:00 AM

Like the kyrielle touches in this one Michael.Rgds Brian and thanks for your very welcome commnts and interesting observations

Marilyn Hernandez

Date: 8/25/2008 11:46:00 PM

haha! I really love this one! It made me 'hungry' for more! I love the imagery you created with this one. Great write! Oh yeah, thanks for your comment too...and by the way...cool name!

Cassidy Loy

Date: 8/24/2008 12:16:00 PM

Interesting. It was really great. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the title, but I was pleasantly surprised. Well done.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/23/2008 7:31:00 PM

Michael Very interesting new write I love it! Laura :) I'm churning for your talent!!

James Foulk

Date: 8/23/2008 4:55:00 PM

yes very creative, really enjoyed it. so warm and tender and peaceful to read. Michael you to kind on your comments, but they do encourage me to keep going. thank you for reading my doggie's little dream and for your comment.

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/23/2008 4:47:00 PM

Clever and creative Michael. Different for you. Loved it. Love, Shar

John Tanaskow

Date: 8/23/2008 11:48:00 AM

sometime just sometimes it fell like forever dosn't it

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/23/2008 11:28:00 AM

Wonderful way to look at it. Very creative and a pleasure to read and savor. Well done. Regareds Heidie

Kareem Musa

Date: 8/23/2008 9:36:00 AM

I had been patiently awaiting your next poem. And you did not disappoint.

Ronald Bingham

Date: 8/23/2008 9:27:00 AM

This one is quite unique I like the comparrison, Ron

Christy Hardy

Date: 8/23/2008 8:22:00 AM

Loved the way you traded places here using churning butter as a relationship...You are so right, to be a team, both have to work at it, practice makes perfect.....thank you for the valuable info on writing my book, and thank you for thinking of my son, and the journey we are about to take...I don't know what I would do if I didn't have all my friends from the Soup. Always, Christy

Adell Foster

Date: 8/23/2008 8:01:00 AM

LOL, Write On Michael, I wrote a piece a while back entitled "Task of Sweet Butter" your title drew my attention :-)However, that's some powerful butter churning, the imagery and flow of the read is dynamic in every aspect my friend. Makes for a happy camper, Thanks for sharing and your supportive critiques. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell