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Lethal

Enraged.. Deliberate act... Drops of life.... Splashed..... Against the...... Paint stained glass......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 3:45:00 PM
I'm a huge fan of dark poetry. This is dark as they come:) Awesome.
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Date: 1/19/2009 7:21:00 AM
Powerful write. Strong emotion well expressed. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/19/2009 6:44:00 AM
I love the directness and tone and i wanted to thank you for the comment you left on my poem.delibrate act thats a good one
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:15:00 AM
I loved the "drops of life" great writing Tyesha, Laurie
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Date: 1/19/2009 2:47:00 AM
Wow, this sounds brutal. I have lived through alot of violence, so this one hurt - vivid work here. love, Kristin
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