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Let Your Love Dictate

Release me from shackles of time tonight let your love dictate every single moment, it will be a journey into infinite, where moments mingle like cascading paints making time colourful but silent. © 2011 kashinath karmakar =================================== Placement:3rd;(September 2011) Contest:Featured poem of the week.. Sponsor:Irma Linda

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Date: 3/2/2012 10:01:00 PM
KASH..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/8/2012 2:16:00 PM
I see congratulations are in order Kash, well done on the placement..)
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:51:00 PM
CONGRATS KASH ON MARVELOUS WIN FOR FANTASTICO WORDS LUV.. SUPERB..
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations Kash on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Abstract Me" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:58:00 PM
CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER WIN WITH THIS SUPER POEM THAT WAS FEATURED MY FRIEND..SO WONDERFUL..LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:45:00 PM
very beautiful write, kash. grats~N
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:48:00 PM
Nice picture.At the same time profound too.A well deserved win,Kashi.Congratulations!
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Kash. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I LOVE THIS POEM! So happy to see it win.
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.Kashinath. I am home (India)
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:45:00 AM
A winning congratulations! CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:15:00 AM
Someone else is keeping that in mind Sami.Thanks for your comment.
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:34:00 AM
I liked your title for the poem. "Let Your Love Dictate" I'll keep that in mind. Congratulations on your superb win :)
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:05:00 AM
Kash, making time colourful...;-) Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:35:00 AM
Hey a big congrats to you on your TOP placement in the contest. Way to go!!
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:35:00 AM
I sure do remember this one too!
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:28:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week! i love "shackles" - inspires me to post a poem where i used that too, if I can find it, lol. "cascading paints" is beautiful :)
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:49:00 AM
CONGRATS KASH ON YOUR FEATURED POEM THIS WEEK ON PS.. DELIGHTFUL ONE TO SHARE WITH US ALL MY FRIEND WITH LUV...
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Date: 9/4/2011 11:38:00 AM
Absolutely love this gem Kash, your title too ;) wishing you the best for the contest ;)
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:46:00 AM
Turn up the air conditioner! This is a warm and romantic piece...You must publish it for a Valentine's card! Just adorable. Intimacy described in colourful silence is serine! soup mail. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:06:00 AM
Kash, you have painted such a pretty picture of time "in the moment" and it's a very beautiful moment! Nicely done!
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:29:00 AM
cheesy as can be! reminds me of the bread album I memorized in jr high and still hum occasionally these days. glad to see you went premium, kash... write on! preesh ya, ~n
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