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Let There Be Light

C: Bone from Adam, creates Eve, Nature seeds, Mothers womb; and A miracle, Breeds.... R: A child is born, life unfolds, bodies with souls searching for their goals, minds corrupt by evil, and the journey of life gets so cold.... C: Where Sin bit her greed, in air, The apple-tree, selfishly lyes, laid; Now poisoned, gave us free hunger of will,banished them in guilt, but GOD forgave their judgement... R: ....and held their hands, bleeding the blood to once again, give us the key to eternal life,,,Amen... Written by: The Drem Team "Richard Palmer and Carma Reed" On; May 13, of 2013

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Date: 7/23/2013 10:50:00 AM
God is the God of second chances..Interesting work that you have penned in collaboration..Sara
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/27/2013 10:06:00 AM
Thank You Sara always a pleasure,,,, Carma
Date: 7/21/2013 2:41:00 PM
Creativity from creation's crest. Lovely team Carma and Richard. Love. Angel
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thank You a lot Angel, we are unstoppable..... Tru blessings, nuff luv,,, Carma
Date: 6/19/2013 2:42:00 PM
this amazing poetry, truly glad i found this...
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/19/2013 4:35:00 PM
hi my dear sweet harry, thanx so much, I have come so far in my writes thanx to Richie he's such A true amazing person and writer.... xxx carma
Date: 6/10/2013 12:14:00 PM
LOVE IT GREAT INSIGHT HOW ARE YOU XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/10/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hi my dear David been away for awhile, glad you enjoyed the light, I have been good.... Xxx Carma

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