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Let the Rain Fall

I could smell and sense the showers coming in the air with an approaching storm. I inhale this light little scent of heaven. The rain will never dampen my spirits. No umbrella for me tonight. But, I don't mind, I'll walk in the rain. I savor this sweet little taste of heaven. The flavor is cool and refreshing, with a purity that is almost indescribable. It is cleansing to my soul, I can feel it washing away my cares, and making it okay to smile, again. I experience this gentle little caress of heaven. When it soaks through my jacket and my jeans. My shoes splash in the rain with every step that I take. I can hear it tap dancing on the rooftops, with invisible feet. The streetlights reflect on the wet pavement, in pools of gold and silver. The neon signs blink, red and yellow, blue and green. Like drips of paint, it puddles on the street. Bringing color to where there was none before, only a flood of gray. Now there is a palette of fragrances to absorb. Creating almost a rainbow in the nighttime. Written by: Kelly Deschler November 11th, 2013 For Nette Onclaud's contest - "Fragrance Of Rain"

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Date: 4/4/2014 8:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Kelly! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/6/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Kim. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 4/3/2014 10:23:00 PM
KELLY, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2014 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT! :)
Date: 4/3/2014 12:28:00 PM
Hi Kelly, :) Congratulations, wonderful winning Umbrella poem. Enjoyed my BFF's winning list..... luv LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/4/2014 7:07:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you very much for stopping by. I enjoyed Leonora's contest, too. It was a fun one to be a part of! :)
Date: 4/3/2014 5:18:00 AM
Hi Kelly, Congrats on your win. I enjoyed your refreshing vision of a walk in the rain. Wonderful imagery. All the best, Theresa xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2014 7:05:00 PM
Hi Theresa, Thank you so much for stopping by. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 4/3/2014 2:04:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2014 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 4/2/2014 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2014 4:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara!
Date: 4/2/2014 11:48:00 AM
A wonderful piece and it deserved a win. BG
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara. That really meant so much to me!
Date: 4/2/2014 11:43:00 AM
- Hey Kelly - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/2/2014 6:58:00 PM
Hey Anne Lise, Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 4/2/2014 10:24:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Kelly! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/2/2014 6:32:00 PM
You're welcome, Leonora! Thank you very much for my placement! I'm very glad that you liked my poem. Big Hugs :)
Date: 1/26/2014 12:25:00 PM
I love walking in the rain and I thoroughly enjoyed this gentle stroll.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/27/2014 4:27:00 PM
I do, too and, I am glad that you enjoyed this walk through my poem, Darren. Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 1/2/2014 4:29:00 PM
Quick glance it looks much more approachable, going to take a deep look now & soup mail it to you. Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/2/2014 4:35:00 PM
Ok done yes, very good choices of where to break the lines and stanzas! 2 tiny things line 3 I'd use [the] instead of [an] 3rd stanza you don't need the [that] in line 7. When ever you write a THAT after your all done look back & think "Is the sentence clear without it? Did I meant which?"
Date: 12/30/2013 1:11:00 AM
Really feel the rain in this. Favorite line "I can hear it tap dancing on the rooftops, with invisible feet"...so many lovely lines and vivid imagery. Congrats.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Karen. That means a lot coming from you! :)
Date: 12/29/2013 10:46:00 AM
a fav for me & 7 , the last verse is super, my only suggestion would be a few different line breaks? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 5:35:00 PM
I understand what you mean about the line breaks. When I wrote this for Nette's contest, there was a 24 line limit, so I had to make my lines longer than I wanted to. But, since that contest is over, I am going to take your advice and do some editing! Thank you so much for the fav, Debbie. It really means a lot coming from you!
Date: 12/29/2013 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kelly, A very well written poem. I liked it a lot....hugs...Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, Roger. I am happy that you liked this one!
Date: 12/29/2013 4:20:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem and congratulations on the fine win,Kelly
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Date: 12/28/2013 9:16:00 PM
Kelly, :) , CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SMILE contest. :) Wishing you a Warm And Heartfelt New Year. Take care.... LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2013 10:57:00 PM
Kelly What a wonderful and sweet write, full of serenity and peacefulness. You told a beautiful and calm story of a rainy spring/summer day. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Hidden Strength poem Hugs
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Date: 12/13/2013 1:02:00 AM
Loved this alot it made me think of a gentle spring rain on a summers night thank you for your comments also.
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Date: 12/3/2013 11:16:00 AM
Hi Kelly, This is such a wonderful poem. I could see and smell what you were describing. You did a real good job on this one....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 11/24/2013 9:33:00 PM
This poem is a joy to read, Kelly! It puts a smile on my face...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/21/2013 6:06:00 AM
Congratst on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:00:00 PM
superb write Kelly congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
Hi Kelly, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:35:00 PM
I'm very happy you won in this contest. BIG congrats. It is an amazing poem
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Date: 11/19/2013 3:09:00 PM
Great Poem, Kelly. I especially liked " tap dancing on the rooftops with invisible feet and a pallet of fragrances." Good stanzas.
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