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Let My Country Awake

Let my country awake.............. When the mind is set without fear When the word speaks without lie When the heart is free from dirt When the knowledge earns without waste When the hatredness dies without curse When the love lives without trouble When the freedom showers without crush When the nature hugs without anger When the heaven throws its blessing without limit When the silent march forward to the freedom Let my country awake. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Date: 4/4/2016 9:35:00 AM
Marvellous......let the country come true.....good day
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Date: 10/25/2013 7:27:00 AM
Excellent write Ravi, I so feel these words. Onelove ~<3~ cherie
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:44:00 PM
And stay awake! Loved this one, Ravi.
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:12:00 PM
A good write. I think all countries should wake up. One day I hope it happens. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/29/2013 1:34:00 AM
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:57:00 AM
Ravi i need to live to see that comes true. Revolution! revolution! Lord Buddha and Our Savior should be here now. good time needy wish! Thank you.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/29/2013 1:35:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2013 10:38:00 PM
wow! Ravi, your words are powerful... freedom will speak ... LINDA
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/29/2013 1:35:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2013 1:44:00 AM
Hi Ravi, a bit different poems from you. - Desire for freedom, honesty and good hearts is something that I wish for everyone. - Everyone has the right to have opinions, but no one has the right to violence or war. - A very good poem my friend! - Have a beautiful day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/29/2013 1:35:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:10:00 AM
Praise for your strong emotion for your country. I second that emotion!!
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Date: 7/29/2013 1:35:00 AM
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