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Let Me Rest

As I lie here a thousand ugly faces fill my mind, haunting, taunting, screaming my name. Confusion mingles panic as I strive to understand all these thoughts and emotions whirling in my head. Going round in circles I never reach the end, and as I close my eyes, they scream my name again.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:31:00 AM

How horrible, I hope this isn't really true for YOU, sweetie. You paint a strong picture of someone going mad!

Gracie Bawden

Date: 7/21/2011 10:34:00 AM

I like here you were going with this, but I feel as though it could be explored further. 'Going round in circles' is also very cliche' but I understand and connect with the confusion you portray, keep it up x

Gracie Bawden

Date: 7/21/2011 10:34:00 AM

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2011 10:07:00 AM

surreal yet beautifully expressed with your pen so fluid, emma... very unique offering! :) huggs, nette

Emma Mantle
Date: 7/21/2011 10:21:00 AM

Thanks nette for stopping by, much appreciated. Em :)