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Let Me Give It To You Straight

It seems to me perhaps you're in desperate need of attention But what you lack to see will be the dagger in your perception The promised lies of men have been but a crutch in your  development Leaving a trail of dried-up husks of an ambitious self-experiment Is it risk-versus-reward or a sense of self-empowerment I implore you on the former as the  latter yields discouragement May i strongly recommend for you a dose of life experience  Listen closely then apply and your strength will know no hindereance Many have littered aimlessly only to suffered to their hells Primarily due to uncitely  influence and a lack of any brain cells Elders always know you see and can guide you on your path How foolish to assume in youth, lest you cherish the ways of psychopaths

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Date: 1/20/2016 9:16:00 PM
ha well expressed.....skat
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Date: 1/21/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Skat... u too kind :-)

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