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Let Me Come Over

Oh, baby, let me come over I could show you a world We could both fade into Show you things like nobody else could We could roll the dice and play all day Fly past the angels and ride the rainbows Come walk with me through the raindrops Let the sparks fly where they may As we walk through the sunsets together It's all I wanna do with you Yes I think we could try Learn to fly ~ come be with me Because I really need you now I wanna hold your hand I wanna make you feel wanted Wrap me up in your love We could fly so high, where Angels touch the sky I just want to feel wanted Let me be the one you run to I feel you on the edge of my fingers Tell me, are you really there Should I know better than to call you out like I do I don't mean any disrespect now I just want to keep coming around 5 am Jan. 4 / 2013 Friday I was bored, so I wrote

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/23/2013 2:41:00 PM

I agree with Andrea. This is a Gem of a poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/23/2013 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Luccilla ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 8:18:00 PM

debbie, I don't know how this gem ever got by me. But it was right here all this time waiting to be read. If this is what you do when you are bored, you gotta get bored more often!!!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/17/2013 12:10:00 PM

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Bl Devnath

Date: 2/13/2013 3:36:00 PM

To pass the boring time, it's a nice style to come over, my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/15/2013 2:08:00 PM

Thank you bl ;}

Bethany St John

Date: 2/2/2013 1:09:00 PM

Loved reading this one! If only my boredom caused such inspiration :) great write!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/2/2013 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Bethany ;}

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 1/22/2013 4:33:00 AM

Wonderful poem Debbie. Love Elizabeth

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/27/2013 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Liz ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/21/2013 10:35:00 PM

This is what happens when you get bore. You get inspired. Good work.Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/21/2013 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla ;}

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/12/2013 7:56:00 PM

What a beautiful Poem you have sketched Debbie. How lovely is the flight touching the sky and feeling the rainbow. All sad things are always beautiful and thing one too. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my Song/Poem. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/14/2013 9:58:00 AM

Thank you ;}

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2013 7:22:00 PM

You mean you were "bored". Good fancifully descriptive write.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/9/2013 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Robert ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 1/7/2013 4:30:00 PM

ah well we have these secret needs, where love n passion intercedes, and heat n steam decries our deeds, just lovers in our fashion.....

Don Johnson

Date: 1/7/2013 2:04:00 PM

poor man he misses cuddles, has she shut the door on you, life has lack of bubbles, when a shiela says we are through... Happy new year....xox

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/7/2013 1:00:00 PM

You'll never imagine how much this poem touched me. It finished a statement that was said to me.

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/7/2013 12:43:00 PM

And from the heart we will take note. :)

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2013 9:11:00 AM

An inspirational write from you Debbie!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for visiting my poem page.

Kerry Singleton

Date: 1/5/2013 6:55:00 PM

Great write Debbie, I have felt this way for many years about someone..

Carma Sanderson

Date: 1/5/2013 6:12:00 PM

Fantastic write Debbie, love the emotions of this divine piece of boredom lol, from top to bottom thanks for sharing it... Love always Carma xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2013 9:55:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work that came out of boredom..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2013 11:16:00 AM

This is both a little sad and beautiful at the same time, Debbie. - But, I like it, well written!! xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/4/2013 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Anne ;}

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/4/2013 8:59:00 AM

This is the kind of thing that gives guys goosebumps. It's kinda sexy in a very nice way. Wish you could clone this as an injection! Have a great year and keep in touch. I haven't written anything yet this year (so I am a little jealous).

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/4/2013 3:44:00 PM

Thank you Duke ;}