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Let Me Be the One

Let me be the one I try to sense, all that you feel I wonder if your love is real Why don't you let me be the one? I know you're filled with doubt and fear please let me dry all of your tears Why can't I be you're rising sun? Chorus Let me be the one I can be the one you love Let me be the one Let me be the one you fit me like a hand in glove Let me be the one... that you love You've waited forever for love All your life prayed to God above Don't you see, He's answered your prayers? You might not feel like I'm the one but you'll feel different, when I'm done 'cause I'm the one who really cares Chorus When I look deep into your eyes maybe that's when you'll realize that I'm the only man for you Love whispers softly in your ears with a voice so crystal clear I want to spend my life with you! Go to chorus fade John Derek Hamilton November 1,2016

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/4/2016 8:31:00 AM

A wonderful lyric with a beautiful message that there's no need to fear in true love:) wonderful, John:)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/4/2016 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Jo

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/1/2016 11:43:00 AM

Everyone is different. Some like myself, weigh the risk, the pleasure of love or the pain when it leaves. I think I'll keep my distance. Nice one, John:)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2016 5:00:00 PM

Yeah, I understand, there's a Spanish proverb loosely translated after being burned by milk you see a cow and cry, something like that. Anyway thanks for the visit, always welcome here.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/1/2016 11:17:00 AM

Do you set these to music? Great work John...

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2016 4:58:00 PM

Yeah most of my lyrics have music, just need to be recorded, and I'm working on that. Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your visits.

Paloma P

Date: 11/1/2016 10:35:00 AM

A beauty John, sometimes we don't realize what's in our hearts. My fave of yours thus far.

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2016 4:56:00 PM

True, thanks Paloma

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2016 10:18:00 AM

Excellent Lyric John. So many people fear to love again after much hurt and it certainly takes patience by another to slowly get through the fear someone else has. I think many will relate to this! :)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2016 4:56:00 PM

True, thanks Heidi.

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2016 9:31:00 AM

Beautiful lyrics with a wonderful message. You are a machine my friend, let's hope those gears and cogs keep turning.

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2016 9:54:00 AM

Sorry, I meant a machine with a heart and a soul. I have seen nothing but quality from you my friend. Every set of lyrics I read by you has a specific message and express your emotions wonderfully.

John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2016 9:43:00 AM

Yeah, machine with feelings, it's a little slow going lately but trying to go for quality rather than quantity. Thanks for the visit and encouragement.