Let Me Be

Let me be the wind So everyone can hear Fill me up with sun rays To brighten the days Let me be the flower Chosen to be picked Carried with a smile Then shared for a while Reach me with reason So I can understand For when my mind is clear, What runs away is fear Then, what’s left is faith Strong as the mountains Unwavering strength To reach such great length Heidi Sands 5/26/19

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2019 7:27:00 AM

Glad to see my FAV poem climbing the best poem chart..congrats, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2019 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I hadn't noticed until your comment. Much appreciated! :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/10/2019 7:36:00 PM

I love the first four lines the best! Just lovely. I've really enjoyed reading your poems. Jeanne

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2019 8:55:00 PM

Thanks for the feedback. Great to hear you enjoy them :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/7/2019 5:49:00 PM

Hello Heidi,well done! Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2019 5:55:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. I am happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice evening :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2019 7:56:00 AM

Beautifully written Heidi, best wishes...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2019 5:55:00 PM

Thank you very much Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/3/2019 1:22:00 PM

Lovely, soft and serene. But beneath, always lies strength. Always beauty.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2019 4:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandy. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Silent One

Date: 6/2/2019 3:58:00 PM

Sorry to hear that. I hope it gets easier for you.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 4:14:00 PM

Thank you ! :)

Silent One

Date: 6/2/2019 10:34:00 AM

Are you ok my friend? Not posted for a while..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 1:13:00 PM

Hi Silent One. Thanks for asking. I have a lot going on right now and I am only able to get on soup here and there. It may be a while, but I look forward to posting regularly again. I hope you are well and appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/2/2019 6:46:00 AM

Positivity reigns in your words Heidi! A beautiful poem to ponder. Happy Sunday xoxo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 6:48:00 AM

So nice to see your comment Mike. I hope all is well. Thank you ! Happy Sunday :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/2/2019 5:28:00 AM

The divine always gives serenity and your poems is clearly serene - a lovely write - hugs Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 6:34:00 AM

Yes, that is true , divine giving serenity. Thank you very much Jennifer :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/31/2019 1:31:00 PM

Serene poetry, Heidi! I feel good meditations flowing from your golden pen. Pure creative lines ... Reach me with reason So I can understand. For when my mind is clear, What runs away is fear. Gorgeous poetry! Love and more love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2019 2:57:00 PM

Thank you for your kind feedback and support Freddie :)

John Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2019 10:13:00 AM

Lovely poem Heidi, enjoyed the rhyme! The message of faith eliminating fear is so true, well done!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2019 10:19:00 AM

Thank you John. I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. Your feedback is appreciated. Have a great day :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2019 9:49:00 AM

Beautiful verse, Heidi, very inspirational. Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2019 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/31/2019 9:16:00 AM

You can be you all you want my friend...we like the "u" in you...lovely write Heidi...A FAVE...^WW^...{*J*}

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thanks so much WW! I appreciate your comment fave :) I hope you have a nice day.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2019 3:49:00 PM

Oh yes, do flower! Beautiful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2019 3:52:00 PM

Thank you M.L ! :)

Robertina B.

Date: 5/30/2019 10:27:00 AM

I really enjoyed your rhyme, Heidi.. So filled with inspiration.. A splendid write, my friend.. A fav.. Have a blessed day!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2019 11:42:00 AM

Hi. Thank you very much. It makes my day and I appreciate people consisering it a Fav :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/29/2019 12:44:00 PM

Had to FAV this one. Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2019 12:50:00 PM

That is nice to hear. I appreciate it. Thank you :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/28/2019 6:10:00 PM

There is nothing more imitating than nature. Great Write, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2019 6:34:00 PM

Thank you very much Ralph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2019 12:48:00 PM

- Beautiful and sensitive, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise . I appreciate your kind comment :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2019 11:08:00 AM

how undulating is this, heidi... your element is really air!...hugggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2019 11:15:00 AM

Thank you! I appreciate your comment on this. Have a great day :)

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2019 6:21:00 AM

Brilliant poem Heidi.. one of great strength..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/27/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you very much SO :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/26/2019 3:03:00 PM

Awesome poetry, Heidi..excellent write--I am happy to save it as FAV.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2019 3:12:00 PM

Thank you very much. That makes my day, you consider it a Fav :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/26/2019 2:09:00 PM

I adore this, I felt it and embraced each line - an inspired and oh so worthy write! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2019 3:11:00 PM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much CayCay :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/26/2019 10:34:00 AM

Really love it's clarity! I can understand it. And the conclusion...a FAV...yaaa! Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2019 10:39:00 AM

That is great to hear. Thank you for your kind comment and considering it a FAV :) Have a nice day.