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Let Me

Let me come to you in the morning I wish to feel the curve of your breast Let me savour the taste of you on my lips My heart beats in anticipation I wish to feel the curve of your breast There will be pleasure within the silence My heart beats with anticipation Our breath limbs and spirits intertwined There will be pleasure within the silence These bodies were formed to be together Our breath limbs and spirits intertwined You are my only satisfaction These bodies were formed to be together Please welcome me into your softness You are my only satisfaction Push into me with those lovely hips Please welcome me into your softness Let me savour the taste of you on my lips Push into me with those lovely hips Let me come to you in the morning

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/19/2014 1:44:00 AM

Fantastic. You've written another stunner, well done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2014 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Scott.

Donna Jones

Date: 2/18/2014 10:01:00 PM

Wowzer....hot and lovely done Richard....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2014 8:18:00 AM

;0). Thanks Donna.

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/16/2014 8:34:00 AM

I almost feel a bit voyeristic reading this very intimate expression of desire. It should certainly keep the home fire's burning. Peace. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2014 8:56:00 AM

Peace to you as well.

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/15/2014 7:14:00 PM

Oh really?!...that's encouraging...Thanks buddy!//Robert

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/15/2014 6:13:00 PM

I think it is a wonderful art form, just way beyond my skill level...and, I do appreciate it most highly!//Robert

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2014 7:11:00 PM

I would doubt it is beyond your skill level. I learned by reading the examples on the soup site.

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/15/2014 6:01:00 PM

RL, I have noticed in other of your works the extreme level of proficiency in your penning the Pantoum art form...it boggles my mind!,,,Excellent Work!...Sensual, as the epitome of romance!...WOW!//Robert

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2014 6:07:00 PM

I started with the Terzanelle and the Pantoum seemed a logical progression. This is an old form and it has lost it's popularity. Still I enjoy it.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/14/2014 1:12:00 PM

very sensual lovely write Rick hot stuff hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2014 1:13:00 PM

Thanks again Shadow, hugs back.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2014 8:04:00 AM

- Soft and gentle words ... romance and love .... what might fit better on a Valentine's day .... Have a romantic day with your beautiful wife, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2014 9:07:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/13/2014 8:20:00 AM

Richard, you may be scouted by the Blue Jays cause you can bring the heat! LOL 7 my best, chuck

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Chuck, you have made me smile. You must be from Toronto Area. I am in the West myself but formerly from Kitchener.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/13/2014 6:46:00 AM

I tried twice to find words to do this justice.....couldn't find them. Hmmmmmmmmmmm...... ;-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:24:00 AM

;0)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2014 8:38:00 PM

very life like...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:27:00 AM

Thanks John

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/12/2014 7:51:00 PM

This is outstanding Richard , romantic and much appealing . A great work.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:28:00 AM

Thanks Kayod5

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/12/2014 6:36:00 PM

Classic..romantic and sensual..I love love it-Charma.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine, I really like your new Avatar Photo, the lighter hair color suits you.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Kayod5

Rex Mccoy

Date: 2/12/2014 10:29:00 AM

Amazing, the volumes that pour through from the heart on a sunlit morn. Fresh air carrying the wake up calls of song birds, all complimenting the steady rhythm of a woodpecker... Just kidding :) Enjoyed this piece this morning

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:31:00 AM

Ha, ha you kill me!