Let It Burn

life's challenges now fused it'll erupt when it wants allow, let it burn .

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James Peranteau

Date: 4/1/2015 8:58:00 AM

This may be sage advise dear poet. I'm wondering if I should apply it to mine last write. Maybe if you have the time kind sir, you can give me feed back. Ironic that I should pick this write of yours to read this day. Awesome James ! Have a wonderful week my friend.....much love, james

James Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 1:05:00 PM

Hi James, it'll be a pleasure to visit ones page. Blessed evening to you, smiles, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/30/2015 9:00:00 AM

Dino James... :) it's reality that there will always be challenges but the thing is to carry on no matter what.. :)! the time we start we can't surpass them, it's the time we start giving up.. :) takes risks.. it's normal to sometimes fail but then failing mustn't stop one to go!! instead it's a push to move and try harder.. :) but nevertheless always with a prayer... :D hugs muchxx//olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/1/2015 5:32:00 AM

:) warm hugs mumucchhh.. :)!

James Fraser
Date: 3/30/2015 4:19:00 PM

Love the wisdom in your comment Oliz, your so right girl, hugs/xx/ your Dino James xxx