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Let Him Go

Her strong apron strings have a hold over him, Suffocating his soul Controlling and grim. "Let him go", I cry out This young man in his prime Is responsible, reliable And ready to shine. Her face wan and drawn With anxiety Is driven by fears Plaguing her constantly. She keeps him close He struggles from her grip Frustrated and confused Heart is torn, nothing fits. His meals and his laundry She does every day He's thirty years old Not in seventh grade. He's got a good job She doesn't charge rent He's trapped, must break free Before life is spent. Written on 2015

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Date: 1/18/2015 10:42:00 PM
Laura, I know of two men, close to me who finally broke free. Problem is, they were never close to their mothers again. I believe because they feared she would try to rope them in again. It is sad when a parent doesn't encourage their child to leave the nest and fly. It is self serving and fear based. Your excellent poem conveys this beautifully. Good luck to this youngman. Very nice to meet you Laura.#7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2015 11:28:00 PM
Thanks very much for your comments, Connie. I do pray me neighbor's son will finally break free.
Date: 1/18/2015 10:21:00 AM
I really like your poem, Laura. You say so much in just a few well-chosen words. I know of a few situations your poem speaks about. Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2015 2:38:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Sandra. Unfortunately, this situation is true of a neighbor who's son is very sweet and watches our dogs when we are gone, but he is being hindered from "leaving the nest" right now. Hope it changes for him soon!
Date: 1/16/2015 7:58:00 PM
Reminds me of a dream where my mother was trying to sew me into the attic
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/16/2015 9:03:00 PM
Lol! That's a good one! :)
Date: 1/16/2015 9:58:00 AM
a riveting message on co-dependence... beautifully scribed, ML.. huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/16/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Nette. I appreciate it!

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