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Let go of your fears, just as the way a river carries away a log blocking its smooth passage Let go of your confusion, just as the way the morning fades away, giving you a clear vision of what is around you Let go of your hatred, just as the way an earthquake ceases to exist Let go of your hurts, just as the way the sky lets go of the night, paving way for the day Let go of your ego, just as the way muddy water becomes clear water when mud settles at the bottom Let go of these, and your life will be as enchanting as a clear, night sky, decorated with stars and shooting stars NB: The first time I posted this poem, I felt as though I had entered another Universe. I was eager and excited to meet new people in PS! ^_^

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Date: 5/8/2016 11:43:00 PM
The moment you are having an epiphany of how things happened, it's also a moment of letting go as you finally reached an understanding. Great first poem!
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:39:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2015 3:50:00 AM
Thanks Linda! ^_^ <3*************<3*********
Date: 3/5/2015 10:14:00 PM
Teddy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your applause Skat!I always appreciate your presence! ^_^
Date: 3/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
uplifting and so inspiring TEddy.. :)! I like it.. :) congrats on winning!!! //olive eloisa
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2015 11:44:00 PM
THANK YOU so much for passing by and applauding me Olive!! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.
Date: 3/4/2015 3:06:00 PM
great piece of writing - lovely flow to the poem - I think the final stanza speaks volumes - something to strive for in our lives:-) Hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2015 11:41:00 PM
Thank you for your never dying morale support and comments Jan! ^_^ Indeed, the final stanza challenges me too....
Date: 10/17/2014 9:30:00 AM
excellent piece of writing teddy love how you drew this
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/18/2014 2:17:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment on my work Liam! :-)
Date: 1/11/2014 12:26:00 AM
Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2014 3:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words Dr. Ram Mehta.
Date: 1/10/2014 11:31:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations:):):) If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> ON THE ROCKS------ http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... Love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/11/2014 3:29:00 AM
Thanks for your applaud Linda! :) <3 <3 I'll sure visit your blog with enthusiasm! :)
Date: 2/23/2013 12:13:00 PM
Teddy , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2013 2:38:00 AM
Thanks Linda! I love your poems too! ;)
Date: 2/20/2013 6:59:00 AM
I like it! Letting go is the best thing to do to bring happiness. Letting go negativity does enchant one's life. A good writing. Regards, Bhavna
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2013 7:59:00 AM
Hi Bhavna. True, that's the only way we can liberate ourselves from hurts of life. Our souls are our refuge. Glad you loved my poem! :)
Date: 2/6/2013 1:28:00 PM
Hi Teddy, I must say - excellent write! I love how the words flow fluidly into each other making the read highly enjoyable. It surely would make life much easier if we can just unburden ourselves and let go of our fears. Well penned. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/8/2013 7:03:00 AM
Hi Vicky. Thank you very much for applauding on my work! True as you have said; life is peace if we unburden ourselves. Regards, Teddy

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