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Let Freedom Ring

-Another collab with Justin Connor-
The long struggle is over We fought hard, And now we have brought the birth of a new nation Where freedom reigns and lifts our spirits high We have shown the world That we do not need to be ruled by a tyrant far away That it is possible to be free from tyranny That we can successfully fight away a most powerful country Free from monarchal upheaval And greedy hearts of powerful men To branch off on our own To establish our own government A united nation! Strictly representing the people Not even the large debts from the war Can destroy our new, unified spirit Nothing can destroy the ensuring joy Of being alive and free Always standing Democracy is part of our life Freedom reigns! Because we have fought and died on this land, We have earned the right to be free And our brothers who have perished in honor for this blessing, Who have fought with all of their might till death, Our most brave brothers, Will be looking down on us with pride And stories of peace and freedom shall ease the minds of the injured Our stories will last for generations to come Many shall write books of our courage And poetry about our enduring freedom Our independence has been achieved We are the land of the free And the home of the brave!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/28/2012 9:32:00 AM
Wonderful Laura, a tribute to those whom believe in self determination, a honour to read this.
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Date: 8/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
To belive in the righteousness of one's ancestors can preserve a sense of purpose in Life Laura - this should be recited before the Super Bowl! The Colonists had been issuing a debt free, non interest bearing currency known as colonial srip which was unaffiliated with the Bank of England, ergo the primary cause of the Revolutionary War - the line of easing the minds of the injured is powerful - with respect - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/27/2012 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Justin :) <3
Date: 8/27/2012 1:22:00 PM
You are an amazing team. A stunning and beautiful poem. - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/27/2012 3:03:00 PM
<3 You're sweet. thanks!
Date: 8/25/2012 7:44:00 PM
Laura, this is a wonderful collaboration with Justin,,, i love the unity and freedom... i can't wait for the new... and the debts to be over.... enjoyed..pd
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/27/2012 3:03:00 PM
I know what you mean. Thanks for taking the time to read!
Date: 8/25/2012 4:08:00 PM
Let freedom ring in Stone Mountian Georgia!
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:49:00 PM
great write be free Laura,loved it
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Date: 8/24/2012 10:33:00 PM
If Thomas Jefferson was alive today, he would be impressed with this writing. In fact, he may have written the Declaration of Independence differently if he read this. Good write that can describe how any country (not just the United States) can achieve its independence.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/24/2012 11:08:00 PM
Thanks! :) I am glad you enjoyed this piece.

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