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Lessons Lectures In Love

You weave wondrous webs with words Practice percolate perfect & perform You spin sexy synonyms secretly seducing sanctions Litigate lustful liaisons languidly You school this student serendipitously Tormenting teasing tantalizing You acquire avant garde aptitude Cautiously coaxing committed candor You reward religiously rightfully Manifesting in momentarily madness & mayhem You devise in detailed determination Her ****** in opaque oblivion

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/14/2014 8:10:00 PM

A sexy win and I like the form you chose.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2014 12:36:00 PM

love the alliteration in this sensual write many congrats on yoiu win:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2014 12:23:00 PM

- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Fate ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/14/2014 11:31:00 AM

an alluring write, fate.. hope to read more from your pages.. big cheers on your fine win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2014 8:56:00 AM

This one would also have been a winner in Dr. Ram's contest. A wonderful first offering to the soup. You will fit in nicely.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2014 9:15:00 PM

Hi Fate ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Skat A

Date: 3/21/2014 10:17:00 AM

Fate, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2014 3:13:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Fate:) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2014 8:02:00 PM

Hi Fate, I love this poem.... The form is called alliteration. Not, many poets around here can pull off this form perfectly this way. I'm rating your poem with a 7. An awesome first poem,:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Fate Dictates
Date: 3/21/2014 2:50:00 AM

Thanks Linda for the great welcome!!