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Lessons Learnt In Life

She Taught me To love her So completely Inch by precious inch Me a willing student Not once was I discouraged She helped me practice night and day With her there were no l i m i t a t i o n s I was given the f r e e d o m to express In time she became a w i l l i ng student She could no longer resist my touch Her an~~~instrument~~~of pleasure Sweet notes escaped as she moaned Time no longer mattered R e s i s t a n c e futile Symphonic--------Joy Floating. ~~~~ up F r o m her Thighs For Silent One's contest "You don't learn anything about life in school" Sometime "HARD" lessons are the best.

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Constance La France

Date: 10/6/2015 12:24:00 PM

Richard, oh so sensual and sexy, wonderfully penned, I like it, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Dad's Workshop ...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2015 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Constance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2015 3:42:00 PM

oh my, you naughty boy with your last note!!! what a GREAT way to do this contest theme. You chose MY theme but took it to a completely different place. NOPE, not something you learn in high school (unless you are one of the "fast girls" hahaha)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:21:00 AM

Ha ha, I didn't know any of the fast girls in highschool and if I did I was probably to slow to catch them.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/5/2015 3:00:00 PM

The harder the lesson.....the greater the absorbtion of the lesson.. ;)......oh for such a teacher. Deliriously beautiful.....my money is on you....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:27:00 AM

;0) i did have a bit of fun with this little poem. It's been crazy here, my business partner has been sick so I am working crazy hours. Also I have to bring my iPad in because it is not displaying any new emails since the end of sept, grrrrr!

Mama Bear

Date: 10/5/2015 11:40:00 AM

come to think of it maybe I should take lessons from you Love mom

Mama Bear

Date: 10/5/2015 11:39:00 AM

Certainly nothing your old mama taught you LOL Best wishes in the contest you sensual guy you. Loads of love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:28:00 AM

Thanks mom I love you too!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2015 11:18:00 AM

In time even the student becomes a teacher to the teacher! Experience counts. Very sensual and sensuous. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:30:00 AM

Thanks Paul, we should never stop learning, it keeps life interesting.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/5/2015 9:56:00 AM

Its different dear friend quite different. Quite a hot and sensuous write. From than angle you have brilliantly painted what you wanted to sketch. Sneh (a Hindi word substituting Love as it can be used for anyone and all) best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:31:00 AM

Best wish s to you as well, thanks for the visit.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2015 8:43:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Sara.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/4/2015 8:41:00 PM

Sensuality burning hot and creativity is off the charts with this write my friend. I have not a clue about this poetry form but see the brilliance in your poem in its depth, sexual message and hidden desires brought forward. Hell with it--- giving this a ten, as a 7 will not do!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/5/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Robert you are kind.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/4/2015 6:57:00 PM

Richard sensual and provocative! The hard lessons are the best lol. One of the best entries I have read so far. I wish you great luck in the contest. This form is very difficult to write in. You have perfected it in this write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/4/2015 7:04:00 PM

I hope Silent is on a similar wavelength as you Michael. Thanks for commenting and the kind visits.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/4/2015 7:01:00 PM

Hi Nejeri, your comment brings me a smile, I was writing of a young man learning the lessons of love from a more experienced lover. I went back and read from your perspective and I see how this can be interpreted differently.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/4/2015 6:13:00 PM

Hi Richard. I like the style you have written this poem in, especially because you are talking about your mum and the life lessons she has taught you. Very beautifully written. All the best in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/4/2015 7:02:00 PM

Oops my response jumped up to Michael.