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Less Than Human

You are not taken by me: You are taken by the shadows and shapes there. Sharp collarbones, acute angles when knees bend, shin to thigh: Movement in the night, soft sighs, I am wisp-of-smoke, wisp-of-woman, neither living nor dead, your head Cradled to my breasts, my eyes soft there. I am your mother, your worship, your hellhound, your whore: Everything to you, I am, but I am not me. You see the curve below the protuberance of hip, the pink softness of these lips, Strangled under weighted red hair: “Who are you?” The moon arches her slivered arrows from the quiver of night, Impaled by the furious darkness you seduce a sea creature, Claim my skin as amphetamine, See one hundred faces of people from ancient cultures and places And each one you see is them, is not me, and: Why should it matter? Do I embody primal identity?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2016 10:36:00 AM
candice, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:22:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week rgds Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserving poem being featured this week Candice. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:10:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Candice. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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