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Less Be More

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Below is the poem entitled Less Be More which was written by poet Joel Lee. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Less Be More

Perhaps I will like so much more
From nothing even to begin with
Of hate and of things to adore
With nothing and everything to believe

Did I want something?
Have I not everything to begin along?
What exactly does nothing mean?
What exactly is everything then to be set upon?

Can I be, am I even believable?
With the many ideas from a troubled mind
A Joel to fathom if conceivable
If a nobody can be everything you need sometime

Something more do you not need?
So much more to feel so incomplete
Silent cries echoing a never to plead
Are we all not guilty never to admit?

Would you like to have so much more?
With nothing and everything to believe
That of hate and of things to adore
When everything is nothing to begin with

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..I really like the play of words and ideas..Sara

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 5/17/2013 1:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara, I did enjoy writing this piece:)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 1:26:00 PM
    A poetic rhymin marvel dats make one tink! Fine muse. Do read mine too esp my latest.

    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 5/17/2013 1:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure thing S.zaynub and thanks for reading mine:D