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Left, But Not Right

I, a cocoon lonely in the corner of an empty room. That face: encased reached up knowing it's place. With lips sublime and eyes that shine. You left, feeling blindly in this cleft. For that night, dawn-less with bitter bite. Coming down, am I to be your clown? From debase in utter haste, I want to climb, to stars that are mine. Bereft of love: the mood moves deft. Within this plight in the darkest of night: I withdraw to tomb, darkened as womb. Was it too fast; to move you to past?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 2:10:00 PM
most interesting verse. take care, Jancarlc.
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Ross Thompson
Date: 12/19/2011 2:13:00 PM
Thank you. This is one of my earlier pieces, written amongst a bad break up. What do you like about it, what don't you like?

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