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Leaving You

Leaving you was the easiest or so I thought lingering deep within my soul devouring me like the waves of an ocean growing deeper and bigger until it consumes me consumes me like a tsunami unable to stop think, breath unable to know completely lost helpless was leaving you the easiest?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/8/2016 11:40:00 PM
Lovely, descriptive metaphors.
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:14:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Ashlyn - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:02:00 PM
Ashlyn, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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