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Leaving the War Behind

Leaving the War Behind for Elihu Burritt, peacemaker The cannon thundered in the South, And with the sound The carols drowned Of peace on earth, good-will to men! - H. W. Longfellow, “Christmas Bells” 1863, your old friend Longfellow almost despairing. What a year! The Union torn. Chancellorsville. War’s ravenous mouth. And then came Vicksburg, Gettysburg. The whole land lay in a bloody drouth, the cannon thundered in the South, and Elihu, you sailed away. For years you let the ink flow like a sea to float the cause of Peace. Yet you found no peace at home. Was it a personal surrender, to be England-bound? And with the sound of waves and seabirds, did you leave behind the burden of a homeland north to south a battleground? Could a foreign landscape comfort you? Or did war images confound – the carols drowned in military march-time in your head? As summer waned, the loss of Chickamauga. Brother killing brother in a marshy fen. Elihu, did you never quite give up the distant hope – oh where, and when? – of peace on earth, good-will to men?

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Date: 7/18/2012 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Taylor. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Taylor. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:20:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Taylor
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congrats on a well written featured poem. A time of agony for both sides. We will see good will when we see an end to power and greed dominating the political scene. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Taylor. Love, Carol
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