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Leaving Oklahoma

In a pile of leaves Made into a bed Under a tree You lay down your head To stare at the sky And dream of a day The river will flow And take you away So gentle the stream So calm the air And muddy the water That takes you there Stained are your clothes From the places you’ve been A constant reminder Of morals within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 4:31:00 PM
Interesting write in this one for it is descriptive and expressive...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2010 10:40:00 PM
ohh... good write here:)
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:09:00 PM
this is really good micah you are very talented.
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:33:00 AM
And I repeat!!--VERY WELL DONE.... A new fav friend.....Good work....:JP}
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:07:00 AM
This poem is very well done. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. True words and so creatively expressed.
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Date: 3/1/2010 1:20:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Last night I was also enjoying stories from a bingo friend who grew up and lived in Oklahoma. Sounds like a nice place.
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