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Leaving Me In An Inward Spiral

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Leaving me in an inward spiral, did you call my name? , Chances are that me and you will not last forevermore, I apologize for my indiscretions for I am the one to blame, I caused you much pain as you caused me much before. My undeserving forgiveness is asked on bended knee, Leaving me in an inward spiral, did you call my name?, I saved you from your hell when you were cruel to me, But now I know that your love for me just isn’t the same. Remember when our love was hot and I was your flame? Please believe my plea as I recall your hurtful actions, Leaving me in an inward spiral, did you call my name? I am sorry for every word I said and that’s only a fraction. I realize I put you through hell once and twice again, But I feel it’s my turn now to receive the pardon the same, I’ll never understand why your love you ever did pretend, Leaving me in an inward spiral, did you call my name? Date Written: June 7, 2016

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Date: 6/8/2016 3:41:00 AM
A sad cry from the soul that touches the chords of the heart:) whoever this is meant for is sure to forgive you, Laura:)
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Date: 6/7/2016 11:44:00 AM
Very beautiful and sad poem, Laura. The refrain is very haunting. ~karam~
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