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Leaving Love Behind

I am leaving love Behind~ Your trickery Took The last little Bit of it. I have become Brittle, Dry like desert Sand and wind Patently Painting Pretty Patterns Into illusions; Magic mirages Made of nebulous Daydreams, Destined to disappear, Leaving me Lonely and lost In despair.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/13/2024 3:43:00 PM

the placement of your alliterative lines was creative (patiently painting pretty dreams) I found this image powerful and can relate to it: I have become Brittle, Dry like desert Sand and wind I felt sadness as I read your poem, for I too have been tricked, with the last little bit of me taken. Definitely a fave for me. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/13/2024 3:11:00 PM

It is sad when one person ruins another's dreams. Hopefully, thus tale will continue till the daydreamer successfully disentangles. Good happiness to you.