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Leaving a Kiss

LEAVING A KISS Shall I leave you a kiss? Kiss that flowers a love forevermore. Love that long been just figments of doubts but if it is you, I will plant my trust. Sweet tasty things be stirring in hush. Pathways twisted shall flourish as they uncoil. Readying a road for baby passion to freely swirl Emotions constellate shimmering rainbow bright Moonshine thrives magnifying fine wine delight If gnawing beastly storms seeps then enclose breaking to pieces the sky, the sea and our earth Bitter tears will spill flooding veins in dark haste slowly killing everything that grows But upon love kiss on lips of faith and hope a spark shall dwell cracking perpetual life banging the taunts twining pain and strife Resurrecting progress in blooms of green and red _________________________________ (c) OLive Eloisa 2:57pm September 09,2014 Contest Name The Poet II THEME: LEAVE YOU A KISS Placed 4th POEM OF THE DAY -- SEPTEMBER 14, 2014

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BE Bailey

Date: 11/13/2014 7:32:00 AM

A job well done Olive. I love what you did here. Great piece. Hugs "B"

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 8:10:00 AM

thanks much BE bailey. :)!

Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/15/2014 1:34:00 AM

A very nice write.. Congrats Olive on your win!love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/19/2014 7:49:00 AM

thanks much Gautami. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/14/2014 10:46:00 PM

Enjoy the top place win of this wonderful write, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/19/2014 7:34:00 AM

thanks very mych Dr Ram . :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2014 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/15/2014 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Joyce..:) GBU

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2014 1:46:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/15/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Jan..:) GBU

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/12/2014 12:09:00 AM

Exquisite Olive! You write with Angels on your shoulders... :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:32:00 AM

Thanks much..:)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/11/2014 10:29:00 PM

A sweet kiss and fine flowing write my friend. Congrats on this being chosen as POD!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:32:00 AM

:) ty

Keith Baucum

Date: 9/11/2014 10:54:00 AM

Great poem

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:31:00 AM

Thanks :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/11/2014 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations Olive on poem of the day. This is a beautifully penned poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:31:00 AM

Thanks much Brenda..:) GBU

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/11/2014 6:54:00 AM

You can leave me a kiss any day darlin'. a thousand cheers for your poem of the day. A beautiful dance of your words :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:30:00 AM

Thanks much Cassie..:)

Gene Bourne

Date: 9/11/2014 4:40:00 AM

Elegantly expressed composition, beautifully formatted. It beckons tne reader with an undersong from beginning to end. Emotion expressed at its best....Your PS friend...Gene.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:29:00 AM

Thanks friend Gene..:) GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2014 4:21:00 AM

- Olive, congratulations on poem of the day !!!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:28:00 AM

Thanks much Anne..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2014 3:57:00 AM

stunning Olive! good luck in the contest and congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:27:00 AM

Thanks much Jan..:) hugs too..:)

Shan Vitor

Date: 9/11/2014 3:19:00 AM

Hooray to a fellow Filipino :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:25:00 AM

Hoooray!!:)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2014 2:00:00 AM

Beautiful Olive... Congrats on pod

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:24:00 AM

Thanks much Tim for the support..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/11/2014 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on poem of the day. I liked this write the first time and like it this time. Well Done.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:21:00 AM

Thanks much Maurice..:) GBU

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2014 11:38:00 PM

Very nice, Olive!! I see you went for the kisses over the tears too. That is because you are so sweet!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 1:21:00 AM

ThAnks much Andie..:) yes I'd like the tears but I'm finding it hard to find one that I'll let out in a happy note..:) GBU

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/10/2014 2:00:00 PM

This poem is so inspiring Olive, the resilience, voice and determination of your love. The progress of love, planted in the mighty kiss of belief. Your language of affection is superb, the skill is so fresh yet mature in description and passion, a world saved by a kiss, Mmmmm..."but upon love kiss on lips of faith and hope, a spark shall dwell cracking perpetual life..." the storm attack is so breathtaking. A Masterpiece! J.A.B. this is way you are in my favorite file!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 11:35:00 AM

Thanks much Justin for the generous remarks..:) though am not quite so sure of my fourth line on my 3rd stanza..:) GBU

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2014 9:21:00 AM

Beautiful! 7 rating!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 2:24:00 AM

Thank you sir :) GBU

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/9/2014 10:51:00 PM

You may leave me as many as you wish! This is such a beautiful poem!!!! Well done!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/10/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thanks for this so jolly remark Art..:) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 9/9/2014 2:15:00 PM

Doubts and trust in a relationship are not uncommon. We trust when we know that we are on solid ground; doubts mean that there is still a lot of work to be done. Never let a kiss distort your ability to think and reason! Enjoyed this write, Olive_eloi and gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 9:37:00 PM

Sure we do trust..:) but it takes time to wholly trust.. :) I'll remember your remark.:) thanks much and well be happy all the time..:) God loves us that much to be at unhappy..:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 9:36:00 PM

Yes Paul.. But the kiss I mean in this poems talks much much more..:) it's not just the kissing act but more..:) as like a kiss that triggers lots of nerve endings. I use kiss a sum total of gestures and actions that can trigger lots of things..:)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/9/2014 1:22:00 PM

love this , so grear a write Olive, superb writing, God bless, Gordon

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 9:34:00 PM

Thanks much:) I enjoyed writing this too..:) GBU

James Fraser

Date: 9/9/2014 12:19:00 PM

Blimey, what a kiss to be left. Absolutely wonderful to read, and surely to do well in the contest. Good luck Olive, I'll be rooting for you, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 9:33:00 PM

Thank you James..:) I appreciate this comment..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 6:17:00 AM

a great take on the contest challenge. i'll leave a tear of joy. Good Luck in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 9:23:00 PM

Thanks much Maurice..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2014 4:33:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, you deliver with a kiss - "But upon love kiss on the lips ....." .. of faith, hope, peace and love - I give you beautiful roses : "They are not dead" - Good luck in the contest, I hope you win ! - Have a nice day, dear Olive - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:28:00 AM

Love roses.. Thanks sweet Anne Lise..:)