Get Your Premium Membership

Leaves Were So Splendid

Leaves Were So Splendid What if all the leaves were so splendid But we were bad and order was rescinded; Would God really do something like that? Not change his mind and still stand pat. For God, great poem I will continue to write Which is so simple and not out of sight Being exactly what He had expected Thoughts with His became better connected. What will it take to make things perfectly planned? Inevitably, pulled my head out of the soft sand And found myself in for quite a big surprise When I wiped all the sand from my both eyes. Finished typing and then turned over the page And started to engage with a lot of rage Not only that I severely started to shout; On back, the whole poem was printed out. James Thesarious Hilarious Horn Retired Veteran

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/11/2014 9:48:00 PM
Excellent write! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2014 6:13:00 PM
Great write my friend. pm on the way too.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs